My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Hi Lyrik, I enjoyed watching your first book review video. I like the way you used your voice and expressions. Next time, you could show your audience the book so they have a visual and be specific about who the characters are and what the book is about. If you are going to recommend the book to others, you could think about other authors who are similiar i.e. if you enjoy Captain Underpants books you probably will enjoy Tom Gates too. Just a few things to think about but the main thing is to keep reading and posting to your blog about the books you read.
Hi Lyrik, I enjoyed watching your first book review video. I like the way you used your voice and expressions. Next time, you could show your audience the book so they have a visual and be specific about who the characters are and what the book is about. If you are going to recommend the book to others, you could think about other authors who are similiar i.e. if you enjoy Captain Underpants books you probably will enjoy Tom Gates too. Just a few things to think about but the main thing is to keep reading and posting to your blog about the books you read.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed it but you could use the book
ReplyDeletegood work but i recommend you make more eye contact with the screen
ReplyDeleteHi my name is korowai and i agree SAM H
ReplyDeleteAwesome Lyrik, at times I struggled to hear what you said so I recommend speaking a little slower and louder :)
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